NokomiswarriorJonathan

I. Introduction
A. Thesis statement [sample: The founding of English colonies in modern Massachusetts combined a strange mix of idealism and violence.]
B. Preview first major point (without support) [Miles Standish contributed important protection to the early colonies by using violence.]
C. Preview second major point (without support) [ Benjamin Church provided vital leadership to protect the colonies during King Philip's War.]
D. Preview third major point (without support) [Despite all of this violence, the colonies were also founded on religious idealism.]
E. Significance of Thesis [It is important to understand the full history of these areas because this is what Americans generally consider to be our nation's beginning.]

II. First Major Point
A. Statement of position (or point)[Miles Standish contributed important protection to the early colonies by using violence.]
B. Detail of support[The intimidation of Thomas Mortan]
C. Detail of Support[The killing of witowoomak]
D. Detail of Support[The brutal nature of the killing]
E. Significance of position (how it relates to thesis?)[ Standish uses violence to protect and enforce the will of the pilgrams]

III. Second Major Point
A. Statement of position (or point)[Benjamin Church provided vital leadership to protect the coloines during king phillips war]
B. Detail of support[he lead a group of twenty men against three hundred indians]
C. Detail of Support[ Running back to get his sword showed courage]
D. Detail of Support[He was a brilliant stratigist and showed it during this battle]
E. Significance of position (how it relates to thesis?)[Benjamin church used violence to help win king phillips war]

IV. Third Major Point
A. Statement of position (or point)[despite all of the pilgrams violence they were founded on religious beliefs]
B. Detail of support[the pilgrams prayed alot]
C. Detail of Support[sabbath on sundays]
D. Detail of Support[ they thought they should be the example of how a colony show imitate]
E. Significance of position (how it relates to thesis?)

V. Conclusion
A. Restate thesis (not re-write)
B. Restate significance of first position
C. Restate significance of second position
D. Restate significance of third position
E. Summary of paper (why is it important)








The founding of English colonies in modern Massachusetts combined a strange mix of idealism and violence. Miles Standish contributed important protection to the early colonies by using violence. Benjamin Church provided vital leadership to protect the colonies during King Philip's War. Despite all of this violence, the colonies were also founded on religious idealism. It is important to understand the full history of these areas because this is what Americans generally consider to be our nation's beginning.
Miles Standish was the guy that would go around and either kill or intimidate the people the pilgrams didnt want near there colony. Miles went to thomas mortan and threatened to kill him if he didnt stop trading boo's and guns with the indians. Thomas went back to england out of fear. Standish went to talk to an indian named witowoomak who standish thought killed squanto. Witowoomak was not intimidated by him so standish invited him to a feast and then while he was eating dived across the table and stabbed him many times. it was important that miles standish ised violence to protect the colonies because the people in the english colonies would not have been as powerful with out him.
Benjamin Church was a import leader during the king phillips war. He lead a group of twenty men after a couple of indians which had them walk into an ambush, he retreat behind a low wall. Those twenty men held off close to three hundred indians. When a man offered to help the get group across the river one by one church was the last to go but ran back to get his sword that he forgot by the wall. He was also a great stratigist, he showed this when he outwitted his enemy and pushed him into a swamp where he had his men surround it. Benjamin Church uses violence to win King Phillips war.